Forsaken Memory
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Yet, another memory was created
Encrypted with lust, visually annotated
A moment in time frozen and captured
Sedated with appetite a desire rapture
The day to follow is now in sight
Adoring the farewell that ended my night
Hoping to see what the bedtime curtain holds
A conviction of what was thought unfolds
Blinded should I have been after this night
Lost in translation nothing seems right
A figment of my imagination I should have known
Away it now goes within the wind blown
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More like what wasn't is correct!! Thanks Yu!!
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BW
Very nice!
Hattie, thank you :)
bw
So Bella, after all is said and done, Was it good for you...Reading this Poignant Poem tells it like it is my friend.
Great poem, up/beautiful
thats a lovely poem, good descriptions
B., Lets just say im not crying over spilled milk whats done is done ;)
Writer, Thank you :)
Jfay, too sweet thanks!
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bw
This is a poignant expression of what was or wasn't, I felt the emotion. Nice work here, bella, as always!
The heat of the moment, the lust in the night. The temptation for both under a moonlight of delight. Faded from memory, it lingers awhile, tasting was fine and the
rapture entwined with bodies unfolding on sheets of satin silver. Now gone, like dust in the wind, blown away never to appear again, awoken and rubbing your eyes you wonder did this truly happen?
I loved the imagery....bravo, rated Up..
a memory created, perhaps just a dream, when things are too good to be real. such passion such desire unfolds in one night and then its all gone... beautiful and touching poem as i can relate. a figment of my imagination..i should have known.
tnder, Thank you it was something that was so I thought but then by their actions it was smeard into something that isn't. They try to repaint the smear but its too late the smudges are noticable.
Saddle, I loved the recap you said it exactly how I thought it out to be. Gosh darn it why cant anything ever work in my favor. I just want what I want thats it no questions ask just do it lol. ;)
Nikki, Dont you just hate that phrase its just too good to be true?? Geez luiz :? Yes should have known that its just one little memory thats it nothing ever will grow :( oh well only time can tell. Oh and I will be by to read your short story I started reading it but been busy at work.
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bella
bellawritter23,
Greetings from MAKUSR. You bring a raw quality and excitement through your poems.
Lots of Love,
MAKUSR
amazing bella...... I love it!!
Fabulous bella, and the picture perfect.
Blinded By The Night,
Dream's So Right,
Longingly Remain In My Sight.;)
Loved it Bella, Was it a dream?
Wow. Thats just how I feel when I wake up with a cold realization that it was all just a dream.
Mak, Thank you very much for your comment and thoughts :)
Sneha, Thank you very much you are truly the best!!
Movie, I thought so to..
Acer, absolutely :))
Always, It wasn't a dream I wished it was at times!!!
Leann, I wish it was a dream but it isn't.
Beautiful poetry. Loved it! Bravo, rated way up. :)
Beautiful. Thanks.
yusefblack 7 months ago
Love it.... Slaves to ??? What once was, or even wasn't